in reply to Crawl
Perhaps I'm being naive.
It might read less like a vagrant's mumblings if it employed formating:
i.e. Millenium, Lump, hand.
Now using:<pre> & </pre>, <br>, <p> or <code> & </code>
Now it looks like blank verse by a very profound Laureat. ;-PMillenium, Lump, Hand.
Alternatively end it:
Fools!!!!! Fools!!!, intelectual midgets!!I'll show them, I'll show them all, ah hah ha ha ha ha ha ha hah ha ha cough cough....
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Brother Frankus.
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Re: Re: Crawl, too Cruel?
by andye (Curate) on Dec 04, 2001 at 21:58 UTC | |
by frankus (Priest) on Dec 04, 2001 at 23:30 UTC |
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