Re: Crawl, too Cruel?

[frankus]

in reply to Crawl

Perhaps I'm being naive.

It might read less like a vagrant's mumblings if it employed formating:

i.e. Millenium, Lump, hand.

Now using:<pre> & </pre>, <br>, <p> or <code> & </code>

Millenium,
Lump,
Hand.

Now it looks like blank verse by a very profound Laureat. ;-P

Alternatively end it:
Fools!!!!! Fools!!!, intelectual midgets!!I'll show them, I'll show them all, ah hah ha ha ha ha ha ha hah ha ha cough cough....

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Brother Frankus.

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[andye]

or millenium hand and shrimp?

[frankus]

That's the chicken! ;0)

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Brother Frankus.

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