in reply to Re: Script/module formatting gotcha
in thread Script/module formatting gotcha
The problem is not that the construction as such is problematic, but that the format of the source-code makes it had to see immediately what is happening (at least that is how I understand the question).
And I am afreid that neither perltidy nor perlcritic would have helped a lot here.
But perl -MO=Deparse <your script> would have.
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