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Hi gang!

I just wrote a Hangman script in Perl. It pretty much portrays the extent of my Perl knowledge. This script is just about as good as I am when it comes to Perl, if that makes sense. I'm wondering if you guys can review my code, give me any criticism, inform me of any optimizations I'm missing out on, etc. I don't really care for "Perl golf"-style code, but I do care about optimized, neat code. Readability is important.

Thanks in advance!

Updated as of 3:11 PM EDT.

#!/usr/bin/perl -w use strict; open(my $fh, "<", $ARGV[0]) or die "cannot open input file: $!"; my @words = <$fh>; close $fh or die "cannot close input file: $!"; my $words = @words; chomp(my $word = lc($words[int(rand($words))])); my (%correct, $guesses); my $turns = 8; while ($turns > 0) { my $displayed; foreach my $char (split(//, $word)) { $displayed .= exists($correct{$char}) ? "$char " : "* "; } if (index($displayed, "*") < 0) { print "\nYou win! You guessed $word!\n"; exit; } print "\n$displayed\n", "Fails remaining: $turns\n", "Your guesses: $guesses\n", "Next guess: "; chomp(my $guess = <STDIN>); $guess = lc($guess); if ($guess !~ /[a-z]/ || length($guess) != 1 || index($guesses, $g +uess) >= 0) { print "\nInvalid guess.\n"; } else { my %word = map { $_ => 1 } split(//, $word); if (exists($word{$guess})) { $correct{$guess}++; } else { $turns--; } $guesses .= "$guess "; } } print "\nYou lost! The word was $word!\n";

In reply to Looking for pointers or optimizations. by thmsdrew

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