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First off, this looks a lot like something from Mr. Wright. Bag it. Use Mime::Lite or something like that for the mailing. But kudos for using pass-by-ref. I see lots of pass-by-val, and that drives me nuts. A couple of other things, but maybe just preference:

  • If you're printing to STDOUT in various places, set $|=1; Otherwise, push everything onto an array, and just dump the whole array when you're done.
  • I don't use the C-style of bracketing. Too hard for me to read. Rather:
    sub function { # code in here }

    This keeps the brackets lined up vertically, and helps me keep track of deeply nested loops. Of course, this is certainly preference, and doesn't really have much to do wrt the code.

  • Dump the "&" in front of subroutine calls.
  • Likewise, dump the quotes in hashkeys, unless you got whitespace in there. Of course, if you have whitespace in your hashkeys, camelBack them or use _ or something. I'm all for saving keystrokes!
  • If you're using a hash, then use the hash:
    @$required = split /,/, $$formdata{'required'} unless ($$formdata{ +'required'} eq ""); $$redirect = $$formdata{'redirect'} unless ($$formdata{'required'} + eq ""); . . .

    I hate stuff like this. Assigning variables to hash values, IMHO, should only be done if you have some really complex data structures, and even then, I believe you should use some sort of interpolation, lest you continue to de-ref every time you access something.

  • Again, maybe just style: Unless it's a small hack, a never define vars outside of subroutines. You forget a my, and all hell could break loose. For more on what I'm getting at, look here
  • If/then is your friend:
    $method = "<font face=verdana size=1>An error with the script's in +stallation has occured. Please contact the webmaster with the error messages listed be +low!" if $method == 0; $method = "<font face=verdana size=1>An error occured with your su +bmission. Please check the errors and make any necessary modficiations!</font>" + if $method == 1;

    Use standard if-then/ternary syntax here. Make perl figure out which case you're on before assigning the $method values. AFAIK, in your code, it assigns the value, then will pitch it if the conditional isn't met. Don't waste the cycles.

  • HTH, and again, much of this may be just preference.
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    In reply to Re: Some suggestions on coding style - a chance to critique by abaxaba
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