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UPDATE: I see now, the "d...in" sounds like a single syllable. Trying additions to second line. But kutsu,convinced me, using alot of good haiku-talk, that it is Ok. :-)
A wise monk mentioned that line 2 only contained 6 syllables. I hear 7... com....plete...ly...con....taine..d...in Does a syllable that rolls off the tongue, make a sound? Maybe grasshopper needs to listen to his own ears? :-) Comments welcome. I'm not really a human, but I play one on earth. flash japh In reply to Re: Lesson for grasshopper haiku
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