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InfiniteSilence:
Jeez, "muddled" and "illogical".
Yeah, both.
And I was gunning for "thoughtful" or "inquisitive."
If you truly want to be "inquisitive", you need to ask questions. That is what "inquisitive" means. Your article was not "inquisitive" because it did not ask questions; it mostly made a bunch of pronouncements about the ideas you already had.
There was one legitimate question in your article, which I answered. Otherwise, it was not inquisitive at all.
Hope this helps; better luck next time.