OK, in five minutes, trying not to remember what anyone else said:
sub updateTiles {
my $fto = $htmDir . 'tile.htm';
## global var used
my $content = '';
open(HOME,$fto);
## no checking for return value, could have redirect or pipe opens
while (<HOME>) { $content .= $_ }
## inefficient
close(HOME);
my $paramTemp,$contentTemp;
## $contentTemp is NOT BEING DECLARED LOCAL (very misleading)
my @sections = qw(Tile Pile Link);
foreach $section (@sections) {
## no declaration of $section
$contentTemp = $query->param($section);
## use of global $query. Why is contentTemp not declared here?
if ($section eq 'Pile') { $contentTemp =~ s/[\n\r]/<p>
+/g; }
if ($section eq 'Link') { $contentTemp = "<img src=\"i
+mages/enter.gif\" width=8 height=12><a href=\"cgi-bin/show.cgi?action
+=showTiles&tileType=Search&searchFor=$contentTemp\">View this month's
+ tiles.</a>" }
## ampersands not entitized, inserted content not entitized or escape
+d
$content =~ s/<!--$section-->(.*)/<!--$section-->$cont
+entTemp/;
## parens not needed on .*, what if $section has regex chars?
}
open(HOME,">$fto");
## no checking return values; what if $fto starts with >?
print HOME $content;
## could get IO error. What if visitor hits page while partially writ
+ten?
close(HOME);
## could get IO error.
my $image = $query->param('Image');
if ($image ne '') { my $newFile = fileUpload('Image',250000,1,
+'latest_image','JPEG','.jpg','.jpeg') }
## image might be undef if param not provided.
}
This code is clearly not -w or strict compatible.
See what you can get for $10 of my time? How many of those would you have found for $10 of your time? {grin}
-- Randal L. Schwartz, Perl hacker
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